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Tenshi no Yami

I'm just saying, you gotta be having a nice snooze to drool... or bad posture. I haven''t drooled in a while so I'm not sure which is more accurate lol

I am curious about these lil munchers. Perhaps they were made and accidently got out? Maybe set them loose on purpose?

The music is always a nice touch as well. Well done, Fiona and Wolf :)

v/r

Tenshi

4 years agoReply

Ernest_Scribbler

Sylus was sleeping soundly hence the drooling. :-)
The metal munchers were made for a specific purpose but that knowledge got lost. Sylus and James will find out that lost knowledge and more about the city Leahstra they're in.

4 years agoReply

Tenshi no Yami

@FionaDaydreamer, i look forward to learning more as i read 🤙

4 years agoReply

Saberwolf

The last sentence left me confused? A lil help here please
(;*_*)

4 years agoReply

Ernest_Scribbler

I've adjusted it. 😅 Is it clear now? Sorry for the large lettering, when editing via moblie it goes a tad crazy.

4 years agoReply

Saberwolf

@FionaDaydreamer, Did Penana remove the suggest editing feature? Well I understand what you meant to say, but the sentence still is off? I dunno tho, still a lovely chapter! Could be just me.

You already mentioned a buzzing sound. So, "As I turned there buzzed the metal muncher really gets just ???" xD

4 years agoReply

Tenshi no Yami

@Saberwolf, theres a chance that the optiin for it got turned off in the story details option. If the creator flips it to yes then the problem should be solved.

4 years agoReply

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