This is a decent start. I like the premise, and I like the trip idea. I do think it leans towards being an info dump, and I'm shocked at how easily the characters are willing to get naughty in front of each other. But hey, I'm not judging. There's also a lot of "telling" instead of showing. For example, "extremely fancy car", "asked tranquilly" are vague and they don't really describe much. How does he sound when he asks tranquilly? Is it quiet? Like a whisper? Overall, I think you have a solid start though, so good job!
Hey! Thanks for your feedback. Yeah, I know exactly what you mean about the info dump. I wrote this stuff in Spanish when I was in my early teens to traumatise my prude friends :') so I am trying my best to keep the 'original' aspects of the narrative, even though I am very aware of its faults.