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I think you did a great job as always! All the characters look fine to me.
Also, I wonder if Caecius softens up when/if his love shows up. I see him acting all tough and powerful (which he totally is, no doubt 😳) but when he sees Neith in danger within Cordis's or Gideon's hands, he may fold 😰

4 years agoReply

Imascribble

Thanks! He probably would be pissed off, too :P

4 years agoReply

Tenshi no Yami

@Imascribble, i kinda wanna see him pissed off.... @FionaDaydreamer can Shadow mess with him?! Give him a taste of his own medicine👏
Sweet chaos😈

4 years agoReply

Imascribble

This was a tough one for me to write (too many characters!) so please let me know if I need to do any adjustments

4 years agoReply

Tenshi no Yami

I like this chapter 😆 I wanna give Nu a hug and set Caecius on fire though.
In regards to damage dealt, Cordis takes on the same damage if in proximity of Jayden(vice versa) when it is dealt.
This is how Cordis knew Jayden was around when he was fighting Magpie (also because of the doll).

Healing would also have the same effect. If they're sharing a wound and near each other when the injury is being healed, the same will happen to the other individual.

Makes killing each other nearly impossible 😅

And Cordis out here lying, huh? Man.... And Navi a prisoner made me giggle (if i read that right)

4 years agoReply

Imascribble

@Tenshi no Yami, Cordis was referring to Nu when he spoke, actually, cutting off any protests from Navi about her being there. Sorry if that wasn't clear. And sorry, I didn't realize it was a proximity thing. I'll be more careful in the future

4 years agoReply

Tenshi no Yami

@Imascribble, no need to apologize! Never apologize 😊 Lets just save the precious bean

4 years agoReply

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