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Lavinia Scott

Wonderful. Really. I'm looking forward for the next chapter. Your writing is great and I already like Elsa's character. You know, I already made few hypothesis but I'll talk you about it privately.

Keep it up, you're doing a great job ! :)

LS.

8 years agoReply

marshmelow_you

Yes sure I'll love to know ;) thanks again for your interest :D

8 years agoReply

Conflagration Blitz

But, um, yes, hello.
It's brilliant. You have captured Elsa's thoughts perfectly.

8 years agoReply

marshmelow_you

Thanks alot :)

8 years agoReply

Conflagration Blitz

How the HELL have you written 2000 words on this?!?!

8 years agoReply

weirdguy96

A few tense errors here and there but an enchanting read nonetheless. Looking forward to the next chapter. Keep this up :)

8 years agoReply

marshmelow_you

Thanks and i'll correct it :)

8 years agoReply

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