So, I just edited the last three chapters and the intro for you. I really like the concept of this story, as well. Is this a true story? I think this is really relatable because girls (not just shy girls) aren't allowed to be as open about their sexuality as boys get to be. Girls have to be hush-hush about it. If this is a true story I suggest masturbating. It will help a lot especially if you have pent up frustration. Just don't hurt yourself lol. Find something that feels good and suits you.
Overall, I really like this story, it just becomes hard to read because if all the grammar mistakes. They are a bit distracting but I will continue to edit these mistakes out, that is, if you accept them. Really relatable story, though!
OMG, thank you so much for your review. It's not a true story but my imagination. I am really happy that you took time to read and as well as corrected the mistakes. I can't be any happier. Thank you so much for your review. Once again, thank you so much.
And yes, I will add more concepts about how open a girl can talk about sexual life. I Am trying to add more details and talk more about how we can please ourselves.
Overall, I really like this story, it just becomes hard to read because if all the grammar mistakes. They are a bit distracting but I will continue to edit these mistakes out, that is, if you accept them. Really relatable story, though!
And yes, I will add more concepts about how open a girl can talk about sexual life. I Am trying to add more details and talk more about how we can please ourselves.