It is fast, and I am getting that this part was supposed to be blurred.
The thing is I just don't feel it. Most of the time it is as if the writing is incomplete.
Five days before leaving and the day before leaving are not blurred, the transition isn't working.
I guess, giving a bit more information about these days, like a bit of packing preparations or something else. Particularly the day before leaving.
And the day for leaving would have been better written off from the airport. The reason I am saying it is, I am unable to relate to any of the three conversations before.
The thing is I just don't feel it. Most of the time it is as if the writing is incomplete.
Five days before leaving and the day before leaving are not blurred, the transition isn't working.
I guess, giving a bit more information about these days, like a bit of packing preparations or something else. Particularly the day before leaving.
And the day for leaving would have been better written off from the airport. The reason I am saying it is, I am unable to relate to any of the three conversations before.
The one that forced me to continue. Just the bist of details here and there, and now it is not just a plain filler.