Well, the flora, fauna and environmental descriptions is something that I think would be beneficial to add to this book.

But, I am not sure how I am going to go about the inclusion of flora, fauna and environmental descriptions, how I am going to add them into the text... how I am going to 'fit' it in with the general flow of the book, but I will try to include them.
I have been editing Chapter Two (with your help ( :) )...

I have come to realise that the majority of the Chronicles Of Astrocrileomiscria chapters need to be re-read and revised. 

I have decided to re-read over the complete book starting at Chapter One and re-reading and editing as I go.

Any suggestions or comments you may have are welcome.

:) 

Nice but I miss some en vironmental descriptions of potential story factors like infrastructure, flora and fauna to drag me into the world itself. I get none of that from this, sadly.