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Frances
I really enjoyed this! It's a good variety of characters with a healthy amount of intrigue for the first few chapters! Your paragraph breaks do need some work though and maybe some more descriptions of the characters and the how the ship looks/smells, maybe what their home means to your protagonist? If you need a beta reader to help with edits, I could give you a hand. Just holler if you are interested!
8 年前回覆
Stgif
Thanks! I would love the help, and could really use it!
8 年前回覆
Frances
@Stgif, no problem! if you are interested, you can just add me as a beta reader on here.
8 年前回覆
Jessamine Kelly
Amazing! Absolutely amazing!! Keep it up!!
8 年前回覆
Stgif
Thank you so much!
8 年前回覆
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