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megangoldberg
There's a spark between us, and I can't wait to see where it leads. Let's explore one delicious possibility at a time, shall we? Maybe something a little... forbidden?
I like this! The emotions that were played out and the words and descriptions of the whole thing. Good job. One thing though, I noticed a few mistakes that does stand out a little. But I think that can be cleared off with a quick fix. The last sentence of this chapter was good, though. It hinted that she's born to do it. Do what? Don't know but that's the mysterious part. I have some theories in mind but I'll kept that to myself first haha
Chloe Quinn
Oh, come on! Whats your theories?
@Chloe Quinn, I think one or two of it has probably been revealed (she's gifted in a way) in the next chapters, but mostly right now I'm thinking that she is definitely linked to the Dragonairs. How does that explain her irrational, restless self who has a surprising temper? Maybe she's an unknown descendant, or a rival descendant? That's about my theory at the moment :D
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