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互評- 開場打鬥日本元素我很熟悉和想像倒出來 戰鬥中的情況也很常見成功在我腦中表演

第一章下半就進入了某種政府遊戲 感覺比較武士生死鬥  主角的導入故事例如他的生活家人之類比較短 沒有足夠墨水 交代很快

但是可能是貴作特色快速進入主線......
6 days agoReply
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