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沐紫藜
抱歉最近工作比較忙，又剛好生病，所以比較晚才慢慢補看作品，還請大大見諒。

你把「不敢再說」寫得很特別，讓兄弟的遺憾可以被彌補。

很喜歡故事用重回過去的方式，讓主角重新陪伴雷夜走過告白、婚禮與人生的重要時刻；但最後真正想改變的，其實還是那句最後還是不能說出口的話。

「你是我這輩子最好的兄弟」這句搭在故事的最後，很有感覺。

謝謝大大的投稿。
3 days agoReply
可能撞名的作家
祝你早日康復，感謝你的評論
3 days agoReply
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