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寧織
@茗那  改好了，麻煩再品鑑一下 !
1 week agoReply
茗那
這樣修改ok 囉！
句子白話，但都有種既美好又依依不捨的調調，像一幅柔和的畫。風與海曾經有過交集，最後卻不敢再盼追上對方，就好像註定是不同世界的人一樣。
即便如此，依然選擇祝你順利。希望留下遺憾的海哪天也可以閃閃發光 ⁺ ⊹˚.
1 week agoReply
茗那
感謝參與 (*´꒳`*)/
我覺得不像參賽作品，所以讀了但先不說太多。
小寧織我們這是要寫祝福喔！

△標題格式錯誤，請參考題目說明修改。
△好像沒有感受到與祝福有關的內容（因為是個人感受所以都可以討論）
1 week agoReply
寧織
好的謝謝!

1 week agoReply
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