I really like your story. My only criticism however, is that no one in such a rush can really take the time to admire the ceiling and whatnot, so maybe try cutting down with the descriptions when she's in a hurry? :D
Thank you so much for your thoughts. I really appreciate your time for writing this comment. And yes, I'll try to do that. I'm still getting the hang of writing in a first person point-of-view so your observation is really a good point for me to the right direction. I'll see what I can write over this week and hopefully re-post a better edited chapter 😉. Thank you again 😊😄