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W.H.
評分：B+
9 months agoReply
九冬夢
謝謝😌
9 months agoReply
W.H.
@九冬夢,不客氣～你也可以拉兩個蕉友來評分啊～

再 2B 就可晉級啦！！

欸，有一個可能要 B+，不然就三位好啦😂

我改給 B+ 囉～
9 months agoReply
九冬夢
@W.H.,謝謝（鞠躬）
9 months agoReply
紫玖島
評分：B
評語：整體描述不錯，可以看得出來秋瑤的各種反應，如果略作修整，專注其中一段的劇情發展，刪除其他人物的枝節可能會更好唷！
9 months agoReply
九冬夢
學習到了，謝謝^_^
9 months agoReply
凝雨
評分：B

這應該是……
作者其中一部小說的節錄？
假設是，對於從未接觸過作品的人，
人物數目未免太多，使主要人物的戲份被分散了，
有些可惜。
9 months agoReply
九冬夢
好的，以後會注意^ - ^
9 months agoReply
小豬瑩瑩
評B-，符合題意，春天象徵希望，等待已久的回來也合題，然而，文好像未完，故扣減了分數。
9 months agoReply
九冬夢
明白了，會改進(⌒▽⌒)
9 months agoReply
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