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陽壽木魚
臥槽，文筆超細膩
3 months agoReply
Nanami七海 sponsored 168coins for Issue 2!
寶新年快樂
4 months agoReply
幽零
好耶~七海海也新年快樂~owo♡︎
4 months agoReply
南嶺笑笑生
一開始有點不明所以，但慢慢看下去後就沉浸入故事中的世界，正！

意想不到的是，飾品竟然是隱形眼鏡！
7 months agoReply
幽零
所以不明所以在哪裡www
7 months agoReply
南嶺笑笑生
@零,就預想不到一開始是意識流般的環境音/顏色/事物描寫，直到時間的出現才感覺豁然開朗。小生現在很好奇第一章設定的能力值會起什麼作用。  別擔心，「不明所以」是褒義，小的認為你的故事給人撲朔迷離；想追看下去的感覺。



夠小了吧
7 months agoReply
楠都月
@南嶺笑笑生,為什麼笑笑生的字會大那麼多（
7 months agoReply
幽零
@楠都月,所以說了笑笑超大（X
7 months agoReply
楠都月
來了！描寫得很仔細，懸疑感也十足！
7 months agoReply
幽零
這速度
坐衝浪板來的嗎（？
7 months agoReply
楠都月
@零,哈哈哈哈，是的（我其實不會游水
7 months agoReply
Miracle
加油👍
9 months agoReply
幽零
tks^-^
9 months agoReply
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