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Your sentence has a few grammatical and structural issues. Here's a revised version with improvements:
"Hi! This is my first-ever collection! I hope you like it!"
Issues and Fixes:
"first and ever" → "first-ever"
"First-ever" is the correct phrase to indicate something being done for the first time.
"collection of my" → "collection"
"Collection of my" is incorrect; it should simply be "my collection" or just "collection" in this context.
Missing subject in "Hope you like it!"
The subject "I" should be included for proper grammar: "I hope you like it!"
Removing the semicolon and replacing it with proper punctuation
The semicolon isn't necessary. A period works best for clarity.
Would you like a more formal or creative alternative?
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"Hi! This is my first-ever collection! I hope you like it!"
Issues and Fixes:
"first and ever" → "first-ever"
"First-ever" is the correct phrase to indicate something being done for the first time.
"collection of my" → "collection"
"Collection of my" is incorrect; it should simply be "my collection" or just "collection" in this context.
Missing subject in "Hope you like it!"
The subject "I" should be included for proper grammar: "I hope you like it!"
Removing the semicolon and replacing it with proper punctuation
The semicolon isn't necessary. A period works best for clarity.
Would you like a more formal or creative alternative?
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