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Yohana Ekky
Halo! Cerita ini menarik loh. Sesaat memang aku mikir apa ini model lain dari Alice in Wonderland. Tapi nggak mau menerka-nerka ah. Hehe. Lanjutkan ya!

Tapi kalo boleh saran, kamu bisa bikin ide yang berbeda dalam paragraf-paragraf, daripada semuanya dimasukkan dalam satu paragraf, jadi kesannya terlalu panjang..
5 years agoReply
saarastika
Hai Yohana, Thanks for reading! :) and thank you for your constructive critic! I will do my best to implement your advice :)
5 years agoReply
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