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這數篇的文筆感覺有一種很神奇的感覺，不知該如何形容，像是一首詩？很多留白之處，沒有說白是誰說了『歡迎來到坦德蒙旅館』，描寫也不是一直線地流動，而是會忽然斷裂（不是壞事），有一種特別的餘韻，加上吟遊詩人這設定就更妙了，喜歡
1 week agoReply
杏仁Lucky
非常感謝www
會忽然斷裂這位部分……說實話，就是以前劇情寫的很碎而已，是壞事沒錯ಠ⁠∀⁠ಠ
1 week agoReply
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