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陽壽木魚
好酷的行文，果然是分鏡式寫作⋯⋯？
4 months agoReply
Miracle
有點強迫症。
個人覺得這樣寫比較「乾淨」 哈哈，謝謝支持
4 months agoReply
Tolerh sponsored 500coins for Issue 1!
小黑很帥啊～
5 months agoReply
Miracle
謝謝大大的打賞OuO 
後面會是很重要的暗線角色
5 months agoReply
Miracle
我文本全部先鎖起來了，感覺太多贅字，感謝你之前的評分
5 months agoReply
Tolerh
@Miracle,加油！
5 months agoReply
原子能
小黑這反應速度根本不是普通人吧！跟無鋒對打那段，雖然亂七八糟但全閃掉了，這本能簡直開掛！「那不是技巧，而是野獸般的本能——不合理，卻無比精準。」這設定不錯。
8 months agoReply
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