I read your book, and it was excellent and really fascinating. Nevertheless, how has your book become viral?

The story's not bad, but you could make some improvements. Bunnybear pointed out speech markers, which I agree with, but I also think you should find a spell checker; there are spots with misspellings and grammatical errors, which I believe can be easily fixed with a quick spell check. 

hey this is super cool!! it would be a lot easier to read with more paragraphs or speech marks to show who's speaking though. but i like the story and the idea, it's really fun :)