I honestly really liked this. I was concerned because it seemed like the start of an info dump, but you pulled it off gracefully. The way you wrote captured the main character nicely and gave the story that bit of personality, the thing I love most. It's not confusing to read and quite entertaining, great job!
I came across your work and was moved by its depth and storytelling.
I’d love to collaborate and turn it into a comic in my signature style.
I offer fair pricing and take pride in quality and emotional resonance.
Let’s connect on Discord if you're interested: felica_spicer