1.0 核心表現力364Please respect copyright.PENANA4vN2EmJNgU
以懸念型的小說為例,核心表現力是:364Please respect copyright.PENANAx68xugqgGM
a. 過去(日常):簡單的細節入手,塑造環境不安全364Please respect copyright.PENANAYpUiVL4u1T
b. 現在(懸念):不安全的異常描述364Please respect copyright.PENANA5MrmgBaSR5
c. 未來(心理):探索人的身邊和心理,各種荒誕的可能性
2.0 爽感364Please respect copyright.PENANAXzW1uaqWXp
表現力的最終目標,是帶給讀者爽感。364Please respect copyright.PENANAm5iJFSVEPy
如果單純只有爽點,而沒有爽感,那麼這種表現力是錯誤的。364Please respect copyright.PENANA6Akppz8nvt
常見的爽點雷區:364Please respect copyright.PENANAxB9G7d4rXK
a. 俗氣,如亂葬坑,紅高跟鞋,紅嫁衣,笑聲,哭聲,水聲364Please respect copyright.PENANAaG5rI1mPt9
b. 虛假,如靈力捉鬼,寶石,水晶,這些是都市爽文,而非懸念364Please respect copyright.PENANAI71fFh2Qy3
c. 空洞,如鬼手突然出現,缺乏了像環境、推理、心理這些表現力
3.0 主線劇情364Please respect copyright.PENANAeU3WGv7oAB
首先必需理解表現力和爽感,之後才能懂得設計好看的主線劇情。
3.1 人設+三條主線364Please respect copyright.PENANAFZnMWFCO1y
以【治癒】和【惡夢】兩書作為藍本,它們的架構有相似之處。364Please respect copyright.PENANAQuVlnwOSiY
a. 賣人設(不會有恐懼/社恐)364Please respect copyright.PENANACMMhCihA7p
b. 功法線(開局比別人強,裝備,夥伴,天賦,等級)364Please respect copyright.PENANAZVCwkeyfSE
c. 刷副本地圖線(幸福社區,益民社區)364Please respect copyright.PENANA4BEdcQ5lnm
d. 世界觀歷史線(惡夢病毒,大boss蝴蝶的)
3.2 主線劇情服務於表現力,目標是給讀者爽感364Please respect copyright.PENANAweND5XhRyA
首先,人設+三條主線,設定了故事的賣點(長篇架構)364Please respect copyright.PENANALqfchlhTTf
然後,用釣子懸念設立期待感(懸念)364Please respect copyright.PENANAUlMJb6mJVy
接著,完成任務和探索地圖的表現力(核心爽感)364Please respect copyright.PENANADMTsye9MZ6
最後,才是傳統意義上的爽點(榮譽感,越級挑戰,獲取裝備夥伴功法,升級,打臉)364Please respect copyright.PENANAN2NcpMMjEI
這是一個累進過程,像上圖中的三維空間會愈來愈大,而架構則幫助了小說不易寫崩。
3.3 功法線的表現力 364Please respect copyright.PENANAo5WGGmENMy
主角的功法線有四個維度,包括:364Please respect copyright.PENANAGgPmqZeRbc
a. 裝備:364Please respect copyright.PENANAz1FZa7SvE6
裝備必需有限制性,如時間限制、消耗品,而絕不能是無敵流裝備364Please respect copyright.PENANAcc1g6BNGWo
攻擊裝備:主角用作關鍵尾刀364Please respect copyright.PENANA1HB5DI2Y8d
防禦裝備:主角前期太弱,需要消耗型防裝364Please respect copyright.PENANAWh2W7L1I2z
b. 寵物:(加成型)364Please respect copyright.PENANAm6qwx4ZeAQ
c. 夥伴:(法師範圍型,戰士物傷型,刺客偷襲型)364Please respect copyright.PENANANJvMqApTRN
d. 天賦:(成長型)
364Please respect copyright.PENANA18Dc8xnbZl