1. 講故事的差異498Please respect copyright.PENANAp3Hfcyklaz
港台的小說,到了大陸會水土不服,最主要是兩岸三地講故事技巧的差異。
2. 望遠鏡和放大鏡498Please respect copyright.PENANA314w7IZMyS
以懸疑文為例,來解釋兩者的講故事差異。
放大鏡(港台澳)498Please respect copyright.PENANA1b7q2yhQPr
要求:新穎的腦洞、優秀的文筆、有趣的角色498Please respect copyright.PENANADO5MPStYrK
看點:498Please respect copyright.PENANArCM1dEzN6f
a. 有趣的角色對話和互動498Please respect copyright.PENANAlT8QToz1zN
b. 有趣的腦洞世界觀498Please respect copyright.PENANAeIWTBKyUfc
c. 文筆優美,用詞優雅498Please respect copyright.PENANAvgudotZU55
但欠缺了:清晰的敘事能力498Please respect copyright.PENANA0aF2flsfVj
反方讀者:連個故事都講不清楚,什麼垃圾498Please respect copyright.PENANAGf7GeYfJd9
正方讀者:很有趣的角色和世界觀設定
望遠鏡(大陸網文)498Please respect copyright.PENANAbdwewqTgSV
要求:簡單清晰的敘事能力、聚焦縣念型題材的賣點498Please respect copyright.PENANAtUU8z5nAgN
看點:498Please respect copyright.PENANAXD7m7K9WcK
a. 這本書的核心是賣什麼498Please respect copyright.PENANAphPGmsS7FA
b. 主角是誰,發生什麼事498Please respect copyright.PENANAt4C0HWKtxg
c. 有趣的劇情498Please respect copyright.PENANAtuhG4hOI78
但欠缺了:公式套路、限制創意498Please respect copyright.PENANApcOLiRKcML
反方讀者:又是這些套路文,什麼垃圾498Please respect copyright.PENANA2ucWO9wphw
正方讀者:這種題材我最喜歡了
3. 選擇498Please respect copyright.PENANAPP5X6UrcDr
既然目標是內投簽約起點,那麼選擇【望遠鏡】的公式套路文風格是必需的。498Please respect copyright.PENANABFuRreHXme
以我內投簽約懸疑文為例,分析大陸網文的看點:498Please respect copyright.PENANA0wHaBfHvv2
a. 賣點:就是賣怪談筆記,主角創詭時思考。498Please respect copyright.PENANACry7n8x7Rk
b. 敘事:男主是十八線藝人,有微笑抑郁,幸得【怪談筆記】,主打傳統詭異和角色成長。498Please respect copyright.PENANA6KhzhIf4z6
c. 劇情:類似空調的角色成長,傳統副本的求生升級。
4. 踏雷498Please respect copyright.PENANA4iej4FiDSF
曾經搞錯過的賣點:498Please respect copyright.PENANA6qBFCqoXeT
a. 有趣的角色。但是代入感都沒有,完全不有趣。498Please respect copyright.PENANAbX8TZVkdBX
b. 有趣的世界觀:但是連故事都未講清楚,太拉跨。498Please respect copyright.PENANAylRjkfxdyP
c. 開局太多角色:但是看得混亂,可棄文。498Please respect copyright.PENANA4NgiX4kcT2
d. 只抄了某元素:只抄某金手指,但是核心的賣點都沒搞清,又拉跨了。498Please respect copyright.PENANA1hyZTMAuIM
e. 只抄了某節奏:只抄某大神節奏,但是核心的賣點都沒搞清,又拉跨了。