1. 講故事的差異564Please respect copyright.PENANAh0kBJGXO90
港台的小說,到了大陸會水土不服,最主要是兩岸三地講故事技巧的差異。
2. 望遠鏡和放大鏡564Please respect copyright.PENANAF0oaFdOOOt
以懸疑文為例,來解釋兩者的講故事差異。
放大鏡(港台澳)564Please respect copyright.PENANAzeOuJGIwqx
要求:新穎的腦洞、優秀的文筆、有趣的角色564Please respect copyright.PENANAqd7SuCu5Es
看點:564Please respect copyright.PENANAAwm9EfEPzH
a. 有趣的角色對話和互動564Please respect copyright.PENANAVLrBaGH6sh
b. 有趣的腦洞世界觀564Please respect copyright.PENANAGk3q8uCKK3
c. 文筆優美,用詞優雅564Please respect copyright.PENANAtUxmzODw9I
但欠缺了:清晰的敘事能力564Please respect copyright.PENANAkkafV9j4Zu
反方讀者:連個故事都講不清楚,什麼垃圾564Please respect copyright.PENANA8h14YMxj2k
正方讀者:很有趣的角色和世界觀設定
望遠鏡(大陸網文)564Please respect copyright.PENANA33TkaOEYqV
要求:簡單清晰的敘事能力、聚焦縣念型題材的賣點564Please respect copyright.PENANAv9iCDDSaLJ
看點:564Please respect copyright.PENANASfNVsiC0Lv
a. 這本書的核心是賣什麼564Please respect copyright.PENANAQqjkiRHDaE
b. 主角是誰,發生什麼事564Please respect copyright.PENANAmcE8GDCOj1
c. 有趣的劇情564Please respect copyright.PENANAX7ge3qrzud
但欠缺了:公式套路、限制創意564Please respect copyright.PENANAVAxGD5LaUb
反方讀者:又是這些套路文,什麼垃圾564Please respect copyright.PENANALtBZ3lrqSv
正方讀者:這種題材我最喜歡了
3. 選擇564Please respect copyright.PENANATMrSlj8tL5
既然目標是內投簽約起點,那麼選擇【望遠鏡】的公式套路文風格是必需的。564Please respect copyright.PENANAtrXIOK0kYC
以我內投簽約懸疑文為例,分析大陸網文的看點:564Please respect copyright.PENANATW7Y4HnOTu
a. 賣點:就是賣怪談筆記,主角創詭時思考。564Please respect copyright.PENANAnDd43LHOXH
b. 敘事:男主是十八線藝人,有微笑抑郁,幸得【怪談筆記】,主打傳統詭異和角色成長。564Please respect copyright.PENANAoESiNosiRh
c. 劇情:類似空調的角色成長,傳統副本的求生升級。
4. 踏雷564Please respect copyright.PENANAV5zfzQsA0D
曾經搞錯過的賣點:564Please respect copyright.PENANAeQD3PS1BqA
a. 有趣的角色。但是代入感都沒有,完全不有趣。564Please respect copyright.PENANA33FW43NWXA
b. 有趣的世界觀:但是連故事都未講清楚,太拉跨。564Please respect copyright.PENANAV4yBORoY6X
c. 開局太多角色:但是看得混亂,可棄文。564Please respect copyright.PENANA3pFql3X5Zi
d. 只抄了某元素:只抄某金手指,但是核心的賣點都沒搞清,又拉跨了。564Please respect copyright.PENANACKm538Wc8g
e. 只抄了某節奏:只抄某大神節奏,但是核心的賣點都沒搞清,又拉跨了。