〈在分手之後〉獲得POPO短篇徵文佳作後,一直想寫一篇後記,但又覺得小短篇寫後記有點矯情(?),無奈冷靜了好一陣子依然想寫,所以就乾脆任性一回。469Please respect copyright.PENANAVt0CTFLvh0
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在發想這篇作品最初是基於一種叛逆心態,希望在呈現「分手」的同時也能營造反差,像是掙扎與幸福、猜測與付出、膽怯與坦承。也就是說如果今天題目是「幸福的戀情」,那我一定會讓它BE(欸等等469Please respect copyright.PENANAPixU0Scsvc
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這次敘事觀點選用了第一人稱視角,希望藉由敘述者有限的資訊,去營造疑點以及鋪陳後面的轉折。469Please respect copyright.PENANARBKgJRGSz9
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在角色方面,難得三個人都蠻正常的(渣歸渣但還在正常的範圍內)也都是我很喜歡的角色類型:溫柔中帶著堅定的表象裡,隱藏著不為人知的一面;處心積慮下的自我懷疑、遊刃有餘下的煩惱憂慮;明明不完美,卻又那麼的真實而勇敢。469Please respect copyright.PENANApTiWmuUnF3
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總之,寫這篇文很快樂,BL大好,讓男孩子談戀愛真是太棒了469Please respect copyright.PENANAEjm6p8S57c
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➥ 內文請往下469Please respect copyright.PENANA38kq4bmZbd
➥ POPO連結這邊走469Please respect copyright.PENANAHGrvHZa5Vt
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題外話1.缺的車是否該補一下469Please respect copyright.PENANAjL3gIGsUjl
題外話2.我總覺得男二這樣的好孩子值得一段好戀情