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創作挑戰新手村——微小說part.1
ENTRY #15
Author: 光明小姐
Published:
May 11, 2020
創作挑戰新手村——微小說part.1
Published:
May 11, 2020
ENTRY #15
反套路
Author: 光明小姐
Published:
May 11, 2020
1 Min Read
250 Words
No Plagiarism!7D08PkEYfk64etG25KMeposted on PＥNAＮＡ

  殺了我！妳忍不住吐嘈。實在是太隨便了！

  妳體諒到作者的描述功力，也許對方只是初學者，不足以行雲流水的用文字構築出讓霍金等一眾科學家哭泣、違逆物理法則的穿越。但怎麼著都應該有場車禍，不必電閃雷鳴，簡單的撞擊總會描寫吧？

  他到底是多麼懶散才只用了「穿越了」三個字去囊括那本可以做為小高潮的橋段？

  別扯什麼簡潔，這很顯然是營造問題。

  「喂！」妳不耐煩的在透明屏幕上敲了敲，向對面的傢伙喊話。

  「這……這是，妳在跟我說話？」妳望著對方從驚訝、磕巴，變成興奮，甚至有口吐連珠砲的趨勢。

   乾。妳暗罵。寫作的都他媽的話嘮。

  「開篇完全不合格。讓老娘教你怎麼寫作！」

  可怕的往往不是穿越，而是妳攤上了新手作者。

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