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修文紀錄
ISSUE #1
Author: 白日季
Published:
Feb 12, 2020
修文紀錄
Author: 白日季
Published:
Feb 12, 2020
ISSUE #1
20200212紀錄
No Plagiarism!46ji4kpN6PSE8SWgA5nVposted on PＥNAＮＡ

我現在才發現penana可以空行。唉呦，快被自己的愚蠢笑死了。

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已修部分：

2-1中間補充一段。修改視角問題。

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發現問題但未修：

2-2時間BUG（因前面修改有做微調，後面沒跟上而弄出問題）

2章全（詭異的分段，敘述文字可再簡略，再檢查人物情緒前後章有無落差，特別是女主）

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現在就屬2章修的次數最少，剛剛重看一遍之後，覺得2章的文字莫名好笑XD

說真的，對我來說網路上po文真的很像公開羞恥play

最近臉皮有稍微練厚了一點，不然之前一把文放上去，不到一分鐘就想刪文了XDDD

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不過人總得學著接受自己的不完美，然後在認識自身的不完美後，還能努力追求更好的自己。

期許自己能成為這樣心靈強大的人。

629Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡJKEWUi1jv0
​​​​​​​不過2章大修文，還是等我卡4章時再來動手吧。

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Last updated: Mar 1, 2020
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