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海の蝶 簡介
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海の蝶 簡介
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No Plagiarism!Po0M8QL4MOMhd0C0DPGCposted on PENANA 每一個意象都用得非常鮮明,好像真的出現了在讀者的眼前,可見作者善於運用意象。340Please respect copyright.PENANAOydDjIdii4
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但是需要注意的是意象與意象之間的相關性,既然藍色的蝴蝶在深海之下舞動,那麼又為何可以說是在細雨之中?340Please respect copyright.PENANAoKgCh6mg2o
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然而我有一點覺得寫得非常好。那就是用了湛藍來形容海,再將蝴蝶變成藍蝶,這樣就產生了海和蝴蝶融和一體的感覺。340Please respect copyright.PENANAoJxz9lMN1E
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