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【第二屆AI評文活動】 讓創作之路不孤單 一起讓故事變得更好
ENTRY #31
Author: NotLinkz
Published:
Sep 29, 2025
【第二屆AI評文活動】 讓創作之路不孤單 一起讓故事變得更好
Published:
Sep 29, 2025
ENTRY #31
《成為魔法師的我是天賦極差的廢材》
Author: NotLinkz
Published:
Sep 29, 2025
1 Min Read
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No Plagiarism!OIMfnUa3Q5GZq00qm3BBposted on PＥNAＮＡ

作品：https://www.penana.com/story/176319176Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡQ5i5lPF9SO

這是我第一次寫小說，打算寫長篇的日系風格，我每一篇章，寫作時間通常跨度都很大，導致我的劇情變得有點不連貫，節奏也掌握不住。176Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡtMfomd4hUd

通常我寫之前讀了什麼書，風格就會和我看的前一本類似，我自己也不清楚為何，有時還讓我的文筆前前後後改變過幾次。

我主要是想把主角塑造成不像魔法師的魔法師吧？176Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ5e93jzZFn3

我想知道我的情節對讀者的吸引力如何，還有我有時候會玩梗或加入點幽默的對話，想知道在他人眼中到底算不算是有趣。

希望是鐵血編+詩音編，其實書評向和心得向我都蠻想試試看的，如果可以的話就想要兩個一起上，感謝。176Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡd6igxbqS3M

以上。

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