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(ﾉ◕ヮ◕)ﾉ～《發揮創意，歡樂寫作！》【2025】 - 一首廣東話的現代詩？聽着一旁老母教仔的心聲。 | Penana
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(ﾉ◕ヮ◕)ﾉ～《發揮創意，歡樂寫作！》【2025】
ENTRY #105
Author: 拾伍hc
Published:
Aug 22, 2025
(ﾉ◕ヮ◕)ﾉ～《發揮創意，歡樂寫作！》【2025】
Published:
Aug 22, 2025
ENTRY #105
一首廣東話的現代詩？聽着一旁老母教仔的心聲。
Author: 拾伍hc
Published:
Aug 22, 2025
1 Min Read
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No Plagiarism!j2nC7cBqEwtAt5YGwz2iposted on PＥNAＮＡ

食鹽多過你食米 拾伍hc189Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡPYhOG4CpZy
189Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡV0FMwuFnXk

生米可以煮成熟飯

咬得耐會變甜

配餸食又無咁鹹

煮餸落得多鹽

會鹹會苦，成碟扔得

哂錢又哂嘢食

落多咗鹽咪配飯囉

齋食飯太寡咪落鹽吊下味囉

食飯都係為健康為飽肚啫

咩都有啲唔好咩？

216.73.216.23

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