100 字微型小說 - 100 篇讀者回饋系列：被怪物襲擊（ 36 潛水中～）留言

可惜文中太多「我」了，如果可以換寫法會更好。最後一句的處理比較好，不然就只是普通的夢境。對於怪物沒有比較深入描繪，所以感覺不恐怖。繼續加油吧，希望潛水中～生活順利。401Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ1Uy9VnCbnN
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以怪物為主題：401Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡi7iqIHMMLc
創挑還沒有結果啊！401Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡM7TfxAtzdB
有了嗎？401Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡliUb152cFA
還沒啊……401Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡSkL3NRMHoJ
怎麼還沒呢？401Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡMAIoai2gzZ
怎麼呢……401Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ3HeeAAM2c3
拖延就是一只看不見卻處處有的怪獸，401Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡqHeTF732LO
我們的生命，越拖越短，越拖越乏。401Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡq4miAIPDuu
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我想在其他平台發，我嘗試不要用創挑。401Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡhZ0zz6uubh
今天會把報告交上來吧？401Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡTvHYGllSqU
我聽說下個星期才是截止日期～401Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡO0elnoMwCd
啊！有怪獸！401Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡCMgpOPy2m1
哪裡？那裡？401Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡsj3WNbLo14
這裡有，這裡有，那裡也有～401Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡeFRan0jMEE
就在你你我的時間裡！401Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡhWqdC6LDub
生命，越拖越短，越拖越乏。401Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡkkwtdf8RFz
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〈被怪物襲擊〉潛水中～401Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡzPgel54Umd
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