100 字微型小說 - 100 篇讀者回饋系列：被怪物襲擊（ 36 潛水中～）留言

可惜文中太多「我」了，如果可以換寫法會更好。最後一句的處理比較好，不然就只是普通的夢境。對於怪物沒有比較深入描繪，所以感覺不恐怖。繼續加油吧，希望潛水中～生活順利。358Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡbtFZraCJMf
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以怪物為主題：358Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡS46K8pQDbc
創挑還沒有結果啊！358Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡmv3ybPdXJR
有了嗎？358Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ6UyLNqKO05
還沒啊……358Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡljOOInxDKn
怎麼還沒呢？358Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡI0FaIjhWHw
怎麼呢……358Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡNFZlRJHeKW
拖延就是一只看不見卻處處有的怪獸，358Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ2yceoj5jMv
我們的生命，越拖越短，越拖越乏。358Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡtVX3EJJYwv
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我想在其他平台發，我嘗試不要用創挑。358Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡTE79mRXBkU
今天會把報告交上來吧？358Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡfaWHJveVsG
我聽說下個星期才是截止日期～358Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡIXINAGExqx
啊！有怪獸！358Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡMaDRp7MPtn
哪裡？那裡？358Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ90zxe24zhi
這裡有，這裡有，那裡也有～358Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡkWZX1m7nuq
就在你你我的時間裡！358Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡEDGHUWTEdq
生命，越拖越短，越拖越乏。358Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ2079LcAtFh
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〈被怪物襲擊〉潛水中～358Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡZhK3jNTFvs
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