100 字微型小說 - 100 篇讀者回饋系列：被怪物襲擊（ 36 潛水中～）留言

可惜文中太多「我」了，如果可以換寫法會更好。最後一句的處理比較好，不然就只是普通的夢境。對於怪物沒有比較深入描繪，所以感覺不恐怖。繼續加油吧，希望潛水中～生活順利。130Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡOv8UsAIIJ5
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以怪物為主題：130Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡvYaOl6uU5w
創挑還沒有結果啊！130Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡYQ6nuOKj1A
有了嗎？130Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡIDTto2Dv9c
還沒啊……130Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡR13yKqC4Eu
怎麼還沒呢？130Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡyVrOnS0uJ5
怎麼呢……130Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡn048LIOlBL
拖延就是一只看不見卻處處有的怪獸，130Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡxz0KJUd3UU
我們的生命，越拖越短，越拖越乏。130Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡl7HjAsBf2W
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我想在其他平台發，我嘗試不要用創挑。130Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡLthjV82pUm
今天會把報告交上來吧？130Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ7Z95HUbtzZ
我聽說下個星期才是截止日期～130Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡGAiHNBPKhP
啊！有怪獸！130Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡR00N2PQ2fB
哪裡？那裡？130Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡX3nIhhfF5F
這裡有，這裡有，那裡也有～130Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡakgcxd7jot
就在你你我的時間裡！130Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡkFwlPjydEL
生命，越拖越短，越拖越乏。130Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡWisDMGnPFI
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〈被怪物襲擊〉潛水中～130Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡOJy509UGwq
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