A君:456Please respect copyright.PENANAJisnu09c4M
謝謝你,不過我這篇沒名字欸—456Please respect copyright.PENANAwKp6o3wTqn
龍晨P:456Please respect copyright.PENANAwsj9bkMyip
你指標題?456Please respect copyright.PENANA6Xo5yQmVuO
但有時訂標題也很困難~456Please respect copyright.PENANABlyFuyc59n
就像你這一段對話(給我看的故事)到底想向讀者表達什麼,很難用十個字以來形容得完。
A君:456Please respect copyright.PENANA8UclNr777Q
嗯對啊,456Please respect copyright.PENANAPYBvoQd1Pj
所以才困擾嘛。
龍晨P:456Please respect copyright.PENANAtkglWMS9CI
那是因為,你寫的時候沒有先定主旨,456Please respect copyright.PENANAj0dHlhLlAe
所以沒有中心思想在。456Please respect copyright.PENANAKsus9XD9Yw
我猜的對嗎?
A君:456Please respect copyright.PENANAM2oyHhIzjj
嗯,我所有寫出來的都是臨時起意的。456Please respect copyright.PENANAwtah2HI9fm
所以...有時候看以前的文,都還會想著:這真是我寫過的嗎?456Please respect copyright.PENANA2WMcyCaZdl
對了,我所有的文都無題。
龍晨P:456Please respect copyright.PENANAej0haHiz6q
看來你真的很喜歡想這些小故事!456Please respect copyright.PENANAj2N3Pu3pBu
如果是長篇故事,很難沒有主題和中心思想。
A君:456Please respect copyright.PENANAg3EsDfaHSy
那是因為我很沒耐心,只能寫短的啊!
龍晨P:456Please respect copyright.PENANALbbF6j1geC
哈哈~真的嗎~XDD456Please respect copyright.PENANAEv8Hnz5HB8
我認為呢~ 只是因為這個故事你沒有材料寫不下去。456Please respect copyright.PENANAiqPIDym7bn
所以下一次你會想到其他人發生其他的故事,456Please respect copyright.PENANArVLAKtOtHT
而不是一直把這個故事接下去,寫成長篇。
A君:456Please respect copyright.PENANA9XiZEn3Iqd
當然是真的啊~所以我之前的小說寫到後面全都是我朋友寫的。456Please respect copyright.PENANApDJDYWjYN2
說來有點不負責任,但我就是沒辦法好好寫完,因為往往都是在我還沒寫完一篇,另一篇的靈感就來了。456Please respect copyright.PENANAh9iDMdPLnV
我才剛打完你就講了我要說的😂😂 狂
龍晨P:456Please respect copyright.PENANA3zMr5xIcgm
我指的「材料」,其實就是你「靈感」的原料。456Please respect copyright.PENANA2KSuPiKA0m
沒有「靈感」,是因為你「材料」用完了。
A君:456Please respect copyright.PENANAuGvKBn77Jc
那材料沒了怎麼補充啊?
龍晨P:456Please respect copyright.PENANA6oqctZtUvk
我先教你如何準備材料,好嗎?
A君:456Please respect copyright.PENANALyeQ6xjNV1
好啊。
龍晨P:456Please respect copyright.PENANAD012mUnVNJ
如果寫作課給你一個題目:「強者和弱者」,三百字。456Please respect copyright.PENANAYjaDNwnRl3
你會想到寫什麼故事?我們看看裡面有什麼材料在。456Please respect copyright.PENANA2Rvex64kSH
大致形容一下你想到的畫面就好。456Please respect copyright.PENANAFNyebhL8tL
這個大致形容就是你的中心思想了。
A君:456Please respect copyright.PENANAPDoDiill82
好的,456Please respect copyright.PENANAXSu7UoYmN5
強者和弱者=弱肉強食的世界、456Please respect copyright.PENANAlEvEthO3uj
有關言情的武俠小說吧。
龍晨P:456Please respect copyright.PENANAXS9xQjaA71
『弱肉強食』是第一類材料,456Please respect copyright.PENANApczEwbxKRT
『武俠』和『言情』第二類材料。
A君:456Please respect copyright.PENANALYcmNlE84g
弱肉強食怎麼會是材料啊?
龍晨P:456Please respect copyright.PENANAAllwY5vA2R
讓我配上一些東西說明吧。456Please respect copyright.PENANAFKgsosgUHP
『英雄』『總裁』『乞丐』『軍人』是第三類材料456Please respect copyright.PENANALt6A9nA8GI
有了這些材料,可以組織出故事靈感。456Please respect copyright.PENANAuuPUDbwI25
比如:456Please respect copyright.PENANApApVc9ANeh
『乞丐』是強者,而『總裁』是弱者。456Please respect copyright.PENANAkmJe1oSh90
兩者之間發生了一個『弱肉被強食』的故事。而這是一個『言情』做主題。456Please respect copyright.PENANAZbQlEr3gqH
總裁被乞丐吃了(攻受意味
A君:456Please respect copyright.PENANAlzwEodIFtM
還是不懂欸
龍晨P:456Please respect copyright.PENANAE8ULslJKem
嗯...我好像舉錯例了
A君:456Please respect copyright.PENANAvYfAcfKCFw
你的思維和他人不同啊…
龍晨P:456Please respect copyright.PENANAblwd0t9yBb
『弱肉強食』描述兩個事物的互相關係456Please respect copyright.PENANA1sjw8kr6lT
一個強,一個弱,對吧?
A君:456Please respect copyright.PENANA9A55R8Pvlz
嗯,對啊
龍晨P:456Please respect copyright.PENANAqJZ3OU81zF
有了這個定義之後,憑空創作出來的人物就有『身份和關聯』,456Please respect copyright.PENANAV42qO90mTX
他們在故事裡,一個強,一個弱,強的一方是在欺壓弱的一方。
A君:456Please respect copyright.PENANAfteiABDp38
強的一方是在欺壓弱的一方的話,那弱的一方是在反抗的一方嗎?
龍晨P:456Please respect copyright.PENANAwRpk3sYtVI
這個要再看其他材料能給你什麼想像了:456Please respect copyright.PENANAKEjT4zUTSW
『老虎』和『兔子』做材料的話,弱者看起來不可能反抗。456Please respect copyright.PENANAWnHPZzuvcR
但如果在放『讓弱者打敗強者』的劇本裡,就會變出弱者反抗強者的情節來。
A君:456Please respect copyright.PENANAMGUiE58Z6l
哦~
龍晨P:456Please respect copyright.PENANAJMo8OR5vYK
然後我就從沒靈感,變成可能想像和寫出:456Please respect copyright.PENANASplEZyf5N1
『一隻兔子用陷阱打敗了老虎』(配上智謀)456Please respect copyright.PENANA3MV1VF3Jwh
『一百隻兔子聯合打敗了老虎』(配上團結)456Please respect copyright.PENANAMZKr2QNlGS
的故事
A君:456Please respect copyright.PENANAtffDJGkHhX
好的、456Please respect copyright.PENANARgNlRoBpDq
可是這故事好誇張啊,一百隻欸!
龍晨P:456Please respect copyright.PENANASMJQvhKhdP
哈哈~誇張是能讓你記得的套路XD
龍晨P:456Please respect copyright.PENANANFUxXwnHAt
現在,我們回來看看你原來的故事有什麼材料?又少了什麼材料? 好嗎?
A君:456Please respect copyright.PENANAGG05PYCri2
我的故事有少什麼嗎?
龍晨P:456Please respect copyright.PENANAEdLxhzIPNI
不知道~ 但你有興趣聽聽我的分析嗎?
A君:456Please respect copyright.PENANABJuX5r2IE5
好,只要是能讓我變好的我都聽!
龍晨P:456Please respect copyright.PENANAe6rBXdgFWq
你想不下去,是因為這個故事只有幾個材料:456Please respect copyright.PENANAecmJb8WwFm
1.『爭執』456Please respect copyright.PENANA8eAxxjB7IF
2.『有錢人/富貴的人』456Please respect copyright.PENANABCDbeVQRGI
3.『分手的情人(主角)』456Please respect copyright.PENANAU2E18h08Yy
4.『狠心的姐姐(主角)』456Please respect copyright.PENANAmyi8axL0sP
5.『不孝女(主角)』
其中3-5都是文章中的"我"她與各人的關係
A君:456Please respect copyright.PENANAYxb9sflx1p
嗯,對,可是這又說明了什麼嗎?
龍晨P:456Please respect copyright.PENANAgVdwZfN4oh
當主角"我"的『爭執』一完了,整個故事也就沒有其他料能用,所以發展不下去了。
A君:456Please respect copyright.PENANAMGQElAM8SP
那如果加入復仇呢456Please respect copyright.PENANAGc1rXjaWi0
搶她大姐的未婚夫456Please respect copyright.PENANAiDouCeG7uN
怎麼樣?
龍晨P:456Please respect copyright.PENANAVsV10Rgxv9
沒錯~要寫下去就要更多的材料。那下一章《復仇》就是你想要的標題了456Please respect copyright.PENANA4X5iWQDksi
這一章叫《爭執》、下一章叫《復仇》……456Please respect copyright.PENANAsWRSqh8B7a
故事主軸可能就是『夏家因怨』。
A君:456Please respect copyright.PENANAGGsalesLbL
好的,了解啦
A君:456Please respect copyright.PENANAvug2k3xrqU
嗯...那男主要誰?
龍晨P:456Please respect copyright.PENANAg1oQtHMl6C
不一定要有吧~?456Please respect copyright.PENANAZqjl12y6Dz
兩個女主角又如何?
A君:456Please respect copyright.PENANADx36Va0nWy
可是我只寫過言情小說啊…
龍晨P:456Please respect copyright.PENANAdaXs6YHILy
比如456Please respect copyright.PENANAuXiIyFknIH
1."我(筑楓)"對夏家『復仇』456Please respect copyright.PENANAjz9Cwd1V8G
2.雨星又對"我"『復仇』
龍晨P:456Please respect copyright.PENANAjHoppovn1Y
呵呵~沒關係~材料齊集靈感到了,你就知道該怎樣寫了!456Please respect copyright.PENANAC4zz4MAK4T
(要創作男主角,也是一樣用『材料』。)XD456Please respect copyright.PENANA6p124v9nAp
龍晨P:456Please respect copyright.PENANAVp0Uyg91G9
只要你學懂解析自己文章裡有什麼材料,要從無沒靈感變有靈感會容易得多。 456Please respect copyright.PENANA8qU9zUz4Wk
A君:456Please respect copyright.PENANAaEvijxy4Ze
你好厲害啊!456Please respect copyright.PENANA3TaVflV55o
(重新把故事編排)456Please respect copyright.PENANAMapy2t8vwR
龍晨P:456Please respect copyright.PENANAnbFUtySYeH
你真的做很好了~剩下的請再找其他人幫你啦~456Please respect copyright.PENANApG4gA11JM8