A君:492Please respect copyright.PENANAd0iCfWRN4q
謝謝你,不過我這篇沒名字欸—492Please respect copyright.PENANA1x1gKBQWji
龍晨P:492Please respect copyright.PENANA6OcYi4pBP7
你指標題?492Please respect copyright.PENANA1zNFqV9WSp
但有時訂標題也很困難~492Please respect copyright.PENANA0CPRGG7Rf2
就像你這一段對話(給我看的故事)到底想向讀者表達什麼,很難用十個字以來形容得完。
A君:492Please respect copyright.PENANAMTPFGYJ423
嗯對啊,492Please respect copyright.PENANAuImUR5N8R1
所以才困擾嘛。
龍晨P:492Please respect copyright.PENANAYjJ22z1Aqk
那是因為,你寫的時候沒有先定主旨,492Please respect copyright.PENANAr0tLhHvRjw
所以沒有中心思想在。492Please respect copyright.PENANA3UmnoGXlv0
我猜的對嗎?
A君:492Please respect copyright.PENANA0cXYykex1Y
嗯,我所有寫出來的都是臨時起意的。492Please respect copyright.PENANAbQi0aIxxab
所以...有時候看以前的文,都還會想著:這真是我寫過的嗎?492Please respect copyright.PENANArLrKV0gqNd
對了,我所有的文都無題。
龍晨P:492Please respect copyright.PENANADg9UGUTnU2
看來你真的很喜歡想這些小故事!492Please respect copyright.PENANA0TxESbX8Wa
如果是長篇故事,很難沒有主題和中心思想。
A君:492Please respect copyright.PENANAJZ6P11zvaa
那是因為我很沒耐心,只能寫短的啊!
龍晨P:492Please respect copyright.PENANAsxC9t1qCGc
哈哈~真的嗎~XDD492Please respect copyright.PENANAdS9q3ycPyi
我認為呢~ 只是因為這個故事你沒有材料寫不下去。492Please respect copyright.PENANAhTiNooDeUw
所以下一次你會想到其他人發生其他的故事,492Please respect copyright.PENANAelKdEYgt0Y
而不是一直把這個故事接下去,寫成長篇。
A君:492Please respect copyright.PENANAotUjbg6NAF
當然是真的啊~所以我之前的小說寫到後面全都是我朋友寫的。492Please respect copyright.PENANAieQNCGU98l
說來有點不負責任,但我就是沒辦法好好寫完,因為往往都是在我還沒寫完一篇,另一篇的靈感就來了。492Please respect copyright.PENANAK2v0TLtIYY
我才剛打完你就講了我要說的😂😂 狂
龍晨P:492Please respect copyright.PENANAKfrz25Ct65
我指的「材料」,其實就是你「靈感」的原料。492Please respect copyright.PENANA7ho9UXM0XR
沒有「靈感」,是因為你「材料」用完了。
A君:492Please respect copyright.PENANAB2amJpN7NR
那材料沒了怎麼補充啊?
龍晨P:492Please respect copyright.PENANA68KElk2Ld6
我先教你如何準備材料,好嗎?
A君:492Please respect copyright.PENANALJgtQwmIlf
好啊。
龍晨P:492Please respect copyright.PENANAdCXMHsxSNX
如果寫作課給你一個題目:「強者和弱者」,三百字。492Please respect copyright.PENANAP1bVqZibUX
你會想到寫什麼故事?我們看看裡面有什麼材料在。492Please respect copyright.PENANAhQ2Y4XDoJm
大致形容一下你想到的畫面就好。492Please respect copyright.PENANAJQtKx9b4BC
這個大致形容就是你的中心思想了。
A君:492Please respect copyright.PENANAzhacvQeVjU
好的,492Please respect copyright.PENANA7bXvmS09Hv
強者和弱者=弱肉強食的世界、492Please respect copyright.PENANAEWzKF6Qx6R
有關言情的武俠小說吧。
龍晨P:492Please respect copyright.PENANAyJtK3F3gvH
『弱肉強食』是第一類材料,492Please respect copyright.PENANAna9RXqZGLJ
『武俠』和『言情』第二類材料。
A君:492Please respect copyright.PENANAVs4Jpf2WCw
弱肉強食怎麼會是材料啊?
龍晨P:492Please respect copyright.PENANA7DZ6FnmOTm
讓我配上一些東西說明吧。492Please respect copyright.PENANA84v6DhkRPm
『英雄』『總裁』『乞丐』『軍人』是第三類材料492Please respect copyright.PENANAKohpwA4rAU
有了這些材料,可以組織出故事靈感。492Please respect copyright.PENANA5Nl34xyINC
比如:492Please respect copyright.PENANAnahiVd4qCB
『乞丐』是強者,而『總裁』是弱者。492Please respect copyright.PENANA5jHE0PHdng
兩者之間發生了一個『弱肉被強食』的故事。而這是一個『言情』做主題。492Please respect copyright.PENANA13k2VkoX2L
總裁被乞丐吃了(攻受意味
A君:492Please respect copyright.PENANAanS9ZJQfaX
還是不懂欸
龍晨P:492Please respect copyright.PENANAwupyMYSKNK
嗯...我好像舉錯例了
A君:492Please respect copyright.PENANAAtnNsVWrNv
你的思維和他人不同啊…
龍晨P:492Please respect copyright.PENANACcRA4zDk1p
『弱肉強食』描述兩個事物的互相關係492Please respect copyright.PENANAnA4Yq7eVS9
一個強,一個弱,對吧?
A君:492Please respect copyright.PENANAwe5T2Zpxtd
嗯,對啊
龍晨P:492Please respect copyright.PENANAyFqOM4ojcW
有了這個定義之後,憑空創作出來的人物就有『身份和關聯』,492Please respect copyright.PENANA2zTQW0BXtk
他們在故事裡,一個強,一個弱,強的一方是在欺壓弱的一方。
A君:492Please respect copyright.PENANAllgihKsDNJ
強的一方是在欺壓弱的一方的話,那弱的一方是在反抗的一方嗎?
龍晨P:492Please respect copyright.PENANARZuRRiEa3a
這個要再看其他材料能給你什麼想像了:492Please respect copyright.PENANArPYvQQHTiq
『老虎』和『兔子』做材料的話,弱者看起來不可能反抗。492Please respect copyright.PENANAs8iGt53kXy
但如果在放『讓弱者打敗強者』的劇本裡,就會變出弱者反抗強者的情節來。
A君:492Please respect copyright.PENANAjfiYi7t8Wv
哦~
龍晨P:492Please respect copyright.PENANAzuTiXDva7q
然後我就從沒靈感,變成可能想像和寫出:492Please respect copyright.PENANAyDS0bezihL
『一隻兔子用陷阱打敗了老虎』(配上智謀)492Please respect copyright.PENANAL3wFb3al0O
『一百隻兔子聯合打敗了老虎』(配上團結)492Please respect copyright.PENANALKzjpw3mXj
的故事
A君:492Please respect copyright.PENANAvwh6DCm3Bb
好的、492Please respect copyright.PENANAptXqWpeXVy
可是這故事好誇張啊,一百隻欸!
龍晨P:492Please respect copyright.PENANAI4akr89Y9l
哈哈~誇張是能讓你記得的套路XD
龍晨P:492Please respect copyright.PENANAq9c2eilzUn
現在,我們回來看看你原來的故事有什麼材料?又少了什麼材料? 好嗎?
A君:492Please respect copyright.PENANAEnZeVT7zxZ
我的故事有少什麼嗎?
龍晨P:492Please respect copyright.PENANAdcduEUv4nl
不知道~ 但你有興趣聽聽我的分析嗎?
A君:492Please respect copyright.PENANAwrTk8qLtgC
好,只要是能讓我變好的我都聽!
龍晨P:492Please respect copyright.PENANAych2JSi4ZQ
你想不下去,是因為這個故事只有幾個材料:492Please respect copyright.PENANAPikgy4MrVG
1.『爭執』492Please respect copyright.PENANAcCyp9zzHkA
2.『有錢人/富貴的人』492Please respect copyright.PENANAwYT6Blgbp3
3.『分手的情人(主角)』492Please respect copyright.PENANAKqh10VqxbQ
4.『狠心的姐姐(主角)』492Please respect copyright.PENANA6syUeDKGH8
5.『不孝女(主角)』
其中3-5都是文章中的"我"她與各人的關係
A君:492Please respect copyright.PENANAxTDUHFxs9x
嗯,對,可是這又說明了什麼嗎?
龍晨P:492Please respect copyright.PENANA97FBJa6xFI
當主角"我"的『爭執』一完了,整個故事也就沒有其他料能用,所以發展不下去了。
A君:492Please respect copyright.PENANA7DKdcssACb
那如果加入復仇呢492Please respect copyright.PENANAht5V8ajpPn
搶她大姐的未婚夫492Please respect copyright.PENANADSm8vyW4n5
怎麼樣?
龍晨P:492Please respect copyright.PENANAHLr2sHVODe
沒錯~要寫下去就要更多的材料。那下一章《復仇》就是你想要的標題了492Please respect copyright.PENANApiDVsnyuyA
這一章叫《爭執》、下一章叫《復仇》……492Please respect copyright.PENANAvG89RURvB5
故事主軸可能就是『夏家因怨』。
A君:492Please respect copyright.PENANAgwZCzBZUBJ
好的,了解啦
A君:492Please respect copyright.PENANAErNIgYq2m0
嗯...那男主要誰?
龍晨P:492Please respect copyright.PENANAg24I86nMWy
不一定要有吧~?492Please respect copyright.PENANA4AeOE4v4PF
兩個女主角又如何?
A君:492Please respect copyright.PENANAiCBSJNyDt6
可是我只寫過言情小說啊…
龍晨P:492Please respect copyright.PENANAMtqwUqWbNV
比如492Please respect copyright.PENANAhCs8Uck3E8
1."我(筑楓)"對夏家『復仇』492Please respect copyright.PENANAonfMZPaMx1
2.雨星又對"我"『復仇』
龍晨P:492Please respect copyright.PENANAyXQBVtu9yt
呵呵~沒關係~材料齊集靈感到了,你就知道該怎樣寫了!492Please respect copyright.PENANAWO4VUUnzyz
(要創作男主角,也是一樣用『材料』。)XD492Please respect copyright.PENANAYxf6VE8UTD
龍晨P:492Please respect copyright.PENANAR7BvRZ06Xh
只要你學懂解析自己文章裡有什麼材料,要從無沒靈感變有靈感會容易得多。 492Please respect copyright.PENANAY39zWBnySC
A君:492Please respect copyright.PENANAovnlArdmO2
你好厲害啊!492Please respect copyright.PENANA2eFpM7R37u
(重新把故事編排)492Please respect copyright.PENANAruHFvFhh7G
龍晨P:492Please respect copyright.PENANAgOXBNH0P1u
你真的做很好了~剩下的請再找其他人幫你啦~492Please respect copyright.PENANA3y4mAyKAMa